Monday, December 4, 2017

Don't Show Your Drafts

As a writer, I am very excited about new projects or ideas when they hit me. I want to tell the world about the new idea I had about the guy who did the the thing with the girl and they had a fight and then she killed him and then she ran across the state to get to Mexico and she ran into the sheriff from Texas who tracked her all the way and...

See how it looks? One big ol' long sentence. That is a huge rough draft of something I just threw together while writing this post. And it sucks big time. Don't show the 1st draft.

In some of the Facebook groups I am a member of, people show their first drafts and they say, "this is my first draft... what do you think? Don't show your 2nd draft.
 
Hold on to your work until you polished it, cleaned it, trimmed the fat a little and dressed it up before showing it off. Don't show the 3rd draft.

What new parent dresses up their new-born baby in rags and dirty diapers when they leave the house to show off her to the family? Don't show the 5th draft.

For writers, our manuscript IS our baby. We invest a lot of time, energy, sweat and tears into our work and when we are ready to show the world our new baby, she needs to be dressed up her Sunday best so the whole world can see her. Don't show the 10th draft.

We want our baby to be perfect. We want the time line just right, the facts all checked, the energy level peaking at the right moment for the climax, and the motions to be high. Don't show the 17th draft.

A photographer friend once told me, and I think the wisdom can be extrapolated to a writer as well, but he said: "The difference between a professional photographer and an amateur one is the amateur photographer shows you all of their pictures; the professional one shows you only their best shots."

So take that to hart, only show off your best work. Don't show the 20th draft. Edit it and rewrite it as many times as you need until you have the most perfect version of what you are writing, so when you do show it off, it will be publish-ready. SHOW ONLY YOUR FINAL DRAFT.

James Patterson has TV commercials on quite often and they are not commercials about something he is working on. The commercials are about his finished work, his final draft, his already sent to the publisher, finished book. We need to listen to that practice and take it and run with it.

Only show your best work.

See you on the shelf.














Thursday, November 16, 2017

What A Rush

Okay, gang, as promised... I am happy to finally be able to make the announcement of the title of my next book and show you the cover!

I'm finally in the final stages of publishing... I had forgotten how many stages this part actually had.

It has been a rush writing this book and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it. I will post more on the pre-ordering once I finalize a date for those interested but for now, I am posting this announcement here in my blog first. Later today, I will start making the announcement in other social media outlets... but you are the first to see the title and cover...

I hope to have published as soon as possible, so please be patient with me. I am shooting for Dec 1st, if things work out in my favor...

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REVERSION - Steven W Lowe
Sci-Fi Western (170 Pages - November 2017)

REVERSION is a Western set in the future between two worlds, Earth, and her closest Earth-type neighbor, Danzor -if 4.5 billion miles can be considered neighborly.

Derek Chase had finally built the perfect life. He married the most beautiful gal in Kansas and they moved to New York where he took a prestigious job as prosecution attorney with the Alliance of Federated Planets. After his beautiful daughter was just a over a year old, he took that final step and made the decision to start his own law practice, cutting the strings from the Alliance -which no one had ever done before. That dream was shattered in one horror-filled violent night.

In a world that had reverted back to a time when justice was found at the end of a smoking barrel, Derek, breaking a promise to his wife, baby girl and to himself, also reverted back to his old self, to seek revenge on those responsible for destroying his life.


About the Author

Steven calls North West Atlanta, GA home. Reversion was inspired by his love of old westerns, which he enjoys watching with his father, combined with another love -science fiction. When he’s not penning one of his stories, Steven enjoys anything outdoors, hunting, fishing, backpacking, and just plain old sitting out back next to the fire pit melting marshmallows between some grams and chocolate.


Wednesday, September 27, 2017

Cover Art and Title to be Revealed Soon

A quick note to say, I am so very close to revealing my next book, I want to let you in on a secret.

I will  release the title, and the cover art to subscribers of my blog, right here, before anyone else...
You will get to see it before the world.


The book is a Sci-Fi Western, set in the future and spans between two worlds, Earth, and her closest Earth-type neighbor, Sanbromida -if 4.5 billion miles can be considered neighborly.

Derek Chase is a the top attorney for the Alliance of Federated Planets. He soon grows weary of the red tape associated with Corporate Law and faces a decision to follow his dream. His dream of opening his own practice, now that his family has started, isturned upside-down in one night.

Breaking a promise to his wife, baby girl and himself, Derek reverts back to his old self to seek revenge on those responsible for destroying his life.

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Here is a short excerpt:
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Before the War
Condensation collected down his glass and fell onto his silk tie as he stared out the window and sipped. He flicked it away without thinking about it, as if it were commonplace for him to be sitting on a shuttle between two worlds. Between a world he knew intimately, the world he was born to and grew up on, and the new world. The inhabitants called it Danzor. He sipped his drink and remembered the times before the war.

Derek gave up drinking close to two years prior, when they found out Erin was pregnant, but frustration had taken over so he ordered a drink. He enjoyed First-Class shuttle flight, since the drinks were free, and since the Alliance paid for the flight. So today he figured, why not and ordered a Scotch on the rocks.

Before the war Derek was happy. Earth was in good shape, and humans treated each other with peaceful regard. But he scoffed while gazing out the window into the universe, thinking how much smaller it had become and how things have changed in his own lifetime.
He checked his phone, still no call.

In 1977 NASA launched a probe, called Voyager 1. Voyager’s two-fold mission was to probe the vast open space, outside of Earth’s solar system, and send a message out into the void vacuum of space with hopes of a response. The probe performed flybys of planets and systems, while constantly sending the message. Voyager sent the message millions of times during it’s travels seeking out an answer.

Around 2027, Voyager’s generators stopped supplying electric power to the scientific instruments, but Voyager still ventured forth. Still sent the message. Still listened for a response.
It is dangerous to listen for the unknown.

In the year 2050, the call was answered by the Danzorian, a civilization billions of miles from earth. They resembled humans in both their physical appearance as well as their mannerisms, so they were able to blend in without effort when they migrated to Earth, despite their noses being a touch smaller and fingers having a little extra length to them compared humans. Most humans, however had trouble learning their language, so they offered assistance in developing a device that could be implanted near the middle ear, that provided instant translation for the humans and the Danzorian so both species could understand the other’s language.

Before the Danzorian responded to the message, before trips to other planets became as normal as going across town, in a hover craft, the universe was much smaller. Before they answered the call, people on Earth thought they were the only ones.

How arrogant, he thought.

Then, the Danzorians replied.

Imagine that. Humans learned that they weren’t the only ones in the universe? Some said I told you so and felt vindicated; some panicked and went to their secret survival cabins in the mountains and the deserts. And some worshiped the newcomers like gods, casting aside their initial religious belief systems. The Danzorian saw the human’s gullibility and set themselves up to be worshipped while taking advantage of them. Christians, Buddhists, and Muslims alike lined up to worship the new True Gods of the world.

Earth did benefit a little from Danzorian’s arrival. However, in the end the Danzorian’s technology came close to destroying Earth and most of humanity. Earth managed to repair herself; the ozone layer healed, trees recovered and provided clean air once again and oceanic life repopulated the waters, but humanity took the hardest hit and stayed down. For Derek, the worst part of them arriving, even though they arrived before he was born, marked the beginning of the dissection of the World Order Government which was in place to maintain the peace -a system that was working at the time.

The governing powers of Danzor reached out to Earth to escape persecution from their enemy, the Sozarians. The Danzorians asked the leaders of Earth if they could use Earth as a home base during the war. The leaders of the U.N. refused at first, not trusting the human-look-a-alike aliens, but the Danzorian offered their protection, during the war, and technology in exchange for our letting them use Earth. They reached an agreement, and during the following years, the Danzorian shared their technology with Earth and Earth started exporting cotton, tobacco, alcohol, and other products to Danzor. Among the most exported, and what became Earth’s most valued export, was plastics. The Danzorian were amazed at the simplicity of plastic and its usefulness.

Humans welcomed the Danzorian’s new and exciting technology, with which, humans began deep-space exploration, and began converting regular modes of transportation into hover crafts. Due to interaction with new species, the U.N. evolved into the Alliance of Federated Planets. The Danzorian began to colonize Earth bringing along their technology, during which time, they prepared for the inevitable war with the Sozarians, who attacked in 2084.

The war continued for six years.



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Sunday, August 27, 2017

How Do You Find The Time To Read?

Stephen King is quoted  saying, "If you don't have the time to read, then you don't have the time, nor the tools to write."

Well, as a part-time writer, it is difficult to find time for either, so I try to get in some time or both reading and writing when I can.

With a J.O.B, trying to find time for either is tough enough, but I do try. I write after 5:00 and on the weekends. My job allows me to, from time to time, work from home. But when I do, I usually work through lunch because I am not distracted by office going on's  and I can get a lot done. Or sometimes the client needs me at lunch time so I work through lunch if they need me. When I do work from home, I switch laptops at 5pm and work on my craft from 5:00 until light's out.

I am dedicated to my work from 8-5, sometimes later than 5.
I am dedicated to my wife and home life most any other time.
I am dedicated to worship on Sunday morning, and sometimes evening as well.

So when do I have time to read?
I make the time.

With Kindle apps available on any electronic deice, I can carry a full library with me anywhere I go.  So, I can't make any excuses for not being able to take any reading material with me. It is there, if I just use it. So the question is Time?

Electronic books are only a few dollars, and some are even free. Also, with a Pay-pall account being free, all I need is some sort of banking account with available funds. So I can't make any excuses for not being able to afford any books. This is my business, if you will, so I can invest in some books to read. They are out there if you will just go get them.

But the question is when how to find the time to rad with such a full life?

When I go into the office to work, if I have the time to take an hour or so for lunch, and IF there are no meetings scheduled and IF the boss hasn't asked me to go to the local pub for a burger, I open the Kindle app on my phone and I read at my desk.

Or, if I have an idea on my book, I open Google Docs on my phone and make a few notes, and then read some more. If I am not reading some sort of fiction, I am reading something to help me with my writing craft. Something on marketing, or other business aspect to my writing career. I find the time to read when and where I can find it. I make the time.

Because I live in Atlanta, GA, and the morning traffic is very thick, I find myself stuck on the highway parking lot quite often. Now, pay attention here...

I am not asking you, suggestion you, or even telling you, to do this. I am simply telling you HOW I FIND TIME TO WRITE.... this is not something I would ever say is a safe thing to do or even legal, so if you do this, you do so at your own risk and I take no responsibility in your doing so.

DO SO AT YOUR OWN RISK.

I read in traffic.

I know I know, now hush and let me clarify... It is a parking lot out there and I am stopped a lot. I open my phone and bring up a book and read... ONLY WHEN I AM DOING ZERO ( 0 ) miles an hour. I am stopped. I am not making any forward movement at all. While I am stopped at a light for those three minutes, I read. While I am in a jam and we are not moving, I read a few pages. Again, I only read when I am not moving. Once traffic starts moving again, I put the phone down and I pay attention to the road.

Another time I read, is at night after my wife falls asleep. She is asleep before I am (I am a night owl) so, again with the kindle app, on my i-Pad mini this time, I open the book I was reading while in traffic and I pick up where I left off. Sometimes it helps me to wind down and go to sleep and sometimes it has the opposite affect. It keeps me up longer than I wanted. But I read when I can.

I read on the weekends. My wife is an artist so on the weekends, after we do some yard work, usually only a couple of hours, we spend the rest of the day together up in her art room where she will work on creating with a brush on canvas, and I work on my laptop. I either write, research a subject, or... yup, you guessed it, I read.

Bottom line is, Stephen King is right, writers, need to be readers as well. And, Mr. King as not the only one to say this. To become a masters of our craft, we need to study, and that means reading.

Read all you can. Grab a book at the grocery store, or download a book onto your device, or what ever your favorite medium is, and read when you can.

Grab a book and invest in yourself.
Invest in your craft.
Invest in your book you are working on and read something. When you are not reading, write. When you are not writing, Read.

- See you on the shelf



















Tuesday, August 22, 2017

New book release Announcement is on its way!!!!


 Coming soon......
 PRESS RELEASE





In a few weeks, I hope, I will be making the announcement of my new book. Title to to be announced then. As well as the location on where to go to pre-order.

Please subscribe to receive notification first.

I will make the announcement here, sending off e-mails to my subscribers first, a few days before announcing it on Twitter or Facebook.

Friday, August 4, 2017

NEWExciting New Release from Tom Fallwell - Dragonblood Throne: Legacy






BLURB

Orphaned as a young child and growing up alone in the forest, Delina lives a life of isolation; her only companion a saber-toothed panther. Her strange eyes frighten those she occasionally encounters, so she keeps to herself, until a young, wounded warrior ends up at her doorstep. As she nurses him back to health, she discovers she is more than just a young woman with unusual eyes, she is a dragonblood, destined to become the ruler of Almar.

Now hunted by the dark sorcerer who murdered her father, usurped his throne, and killed all her kin, she must find out how she can release the essence of the dragon inside her to defeat him. Everything depends upon her willingness to embrace her legacy and reclaim the Dragon Throne.






Excerpt from Dragonblood Throne: Legacy, by Tom Fallwell

Copyright © 2017 by Tom Fallwell – All Rights Reserved


Ignoring the two scribes fidgeting nervously behind him, Kargoth anxiously watched the cosmic tableau of the moons unfold in the darkened sky from his balcony. The rare, lunar eclipse was only moments away from its apex, the new moon phase of Tibel almost centered within the bright ring of Sianor behind it.

While he would never admit it, not even to himself, Kargoth was fearful as he waited to see if the prophecy was true, if there would be a sign indicating a dragonblood still lived in Almar. The words of that prophecy played continually in his mind as he waited with bated breath.

Ring of the heavens,
Ring shining bright.
Darkness the lesser
Than greater moon's light.
When the ring glows bright
As the moons above turn,
Blood shows the sign
Of the dragons return.
A dragon reborn
From an innocent child.
The power will grow
As emotions run wild.
The dragon will rise
When all hope seems lost.
All evil will pay
The dragonblood's cost.
The dragonblood comes,
The darkness will die.
The dragon wings spread
And the dragon will fly.

“Here it comes,” Kargoth said, never removing his gaze from the moons. “Now we’ll see if there is any truth to this prophecy.”

The scribes trembled, fearing their High Lord's wrath, as Tibel firmly centered itself in front of Sianor. The light in the night lessened momentarily as Tibel covered much of Sianor's full and bright splendor.

The slim circle of light around Tibel began to burn brightly, becoming a brilliant glowing ring in the night sky. For a moment, the scholars hoped that perhaps the prophecy was false, but a red glow began to fill the darkness of Tibel. It was as if some celestial being had poured a bowl of blood into the mold of the darkened Tibel, now glowing with a red, unearthly light. The eclipse became a white circle filled with a blood-red glow.

The prophecy was true! It was a sign of blood! Of dragonblood!

The scribes slowly backed away from the balcony in fear, anticipating the wrath of their lord. They could almost hear Kargoth's rage brewing inside him as he suddenly turned on them, his steel eyes boring into their souls.

“It's true! That beast, Jeraldin, had another child!” His anger turned on the two robed figures. “You should have known this sooner! You impotent cretins!”

He raised both hands in front of him, palms outward. The terrified scribes turned to run, but it was too late. A dark fiery energy streamed from both his hands, as jets of black, searing flame engulfed the two men. Their horrifying screams of agony echoed throughout the chamber and into the halls beyond as their bodies were consumed by the deadly power Kargoth had loosed upon them. Within seconds, only smoldering piles of ash remained on the floor.

Dropping his hands in frustration, a deep and tortured frown peeked from the shadows of his hood. Kargoth stormed toward the throne room door. “Guards! Guards! Get my generals! Now!”

Whoever this dragonblood was, Kargoth had to make sure they never lived long enough to be a threat to his power. He would scour the entire kingdom and find this dragonblood. He couldn’t allow one of their kind to live.




 About the Author


Early in life, Tom Fallwell discovered a love for fantasy and science-fiction, delighting in the wonderful escape into realms undreamed of. Weaned on the greats like J.R.R. Tolkien, Isaac Asimov, Ray Bradbury, Arthur C. Clarke, Robert E. Howard, Roger Zelazny, Robert A. Heinlein, and Michael Moorcock, just to name a few, Tom's imagination was forever inspired by those marvelous tales.

One day, he discovered a simple book of rules called 'Chainmail', by Gary Gygax, and found a new love: the love of creating adventures and stories of his own. 'Chainmail' evolved into 'Dungeons & Dragons', and Tom played consistently with friends as both a player and a dungeon master (DM) for decades. Such activities helped him develop his ability to create worlds and stories for other players to enjoy.

Now retired from his long career as a software developer, Tom writes all the adventures and characters that constantly fill his mind and shares them with the world.








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Where to buy


Smashwords: 
https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/735008

Monday, May 8, 2017

It's Your World, You Decide

In a post on one of the many writer's Facebook pages I am a member of, someone posted a question about his story-line. To protect the innocent, I will say that she asked about the functionality of a certain group. She stated that her friend said it would not work, and was stupid.
WOW! I mean, really?

Back in the day, someone decided to put a straight man in tights, place a cape on his back and a huge letter "S" on his chest and made him fly. Look how that turned out.
I would be willing to bet that one of his friends may have even said, "Men don't fly. That's stupid."

Here are four points to remember as a writer. (and yes I have to remind myself of these as well)

1)      You can't make everyone happy.
                   Ann rice said in a video, she still gets reviews staying that Interview With a Vampire is the worst book ever written.

2)      Your momma's opinion doesn't matter.
                     I love my parents big-time and they will be supportive of anything I work on.  However I know I probably won't get constructive comments about my work. If you want honest opinions, ask strangers. Although when working on REVERSION, she stopped reading because it was too graphic. That was the highest compliment I could receive.

3)      It's your world, you are the creator.
                    If you want to leave a car parked in the lot at the airport for three years, make it so. Is it possible for a car to be left there for that long, maybe not, in real life, but in your story, which is FICTION by the way, it can happen because it is part of your story.

James Patterson "does not write realisms"... his words not mine. He writes just beyond that. In one of his books, kids were part of an experiment, and one of them grew wings. NOT POSSIBLE!!!! some might say, but it was in his story.

4).     If a woman can write about a geeky little kid with round glasses that learns magic, then you can do anything you want.

It's your world so you decide what exists there, in what color, in what size, and for how long. 

-See you on the shelves.